I was sitting in the dark night staring up at Colorado’s Rocky Mountains, tears running down my cheeks, frozen with anger. “I am so stupid!” I yelled out, the sound piercing the freezing air. “You Amber Wichock are the stupidest person that ever lived!” I stood and looked around. I thought there was nobody for miles, but then, out of the corner of my eye, I spotted a figure lurking behind the trees. They came out into the open, I could only see their outline in the dark but I could certainly hear them. “What is the matter?” They asked, it sounded like a girl. I didn’t know this person, but I couldn’t hold it in any longer. I answered her with a squeaking voice, “I killed my parents.”
A superb combination of suspense and mystery.
ReplyDeleteWow. That left me in total shock and question. I loved how intensly the story ended, leaving me wanting to know so much more.
ReplyDeleteOMG!!! I love your ending! I hope that you'll continue on with the story!!! You might want to check your grammar though...
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