"You only live life once; but if you live it right, once is enough." - Adam Marshall

Friday, December 21, 2012

Should I Go Back?


Authors note: This is a creative ending for the short story Thank You Ma'am 
After he left,  he spent days pondering the visit, wondering whether or not he should go back. He thought about how mean she was at the beginning, but then again how nice she was at the end. He thought about the 10 dollars she gave him, and thought maybe he should show her his new blue suede shoes. After she gave it to him, he wanted to buy food, but no. She had given him the money for shoes, so that’s what he bought. He thought about how understanding she had been, and wondered if he should tell her the truth.
After many hours of going back and forth, he gathered up the courage to return to the precious woman. He walked up the drive, his blue suede shoes shining in the sun. Just as he was ringing the bell, the door opened. Mrs. Jones almost walked right into him. “Oh!” She said surprised.
“Hi. Ma’am.” Roger said. “I wanted to thank you again for helping me. I bought some new shoes.”
“That’s very good.” Said Mrs. Jones. Even though Mrs. Jones looked busy, Roger knew this would be the only time he would gather the courage to say it. It was now or never.
“Ma’am I have to talk to you.” He said
“Okay, how about you come in for some tea.” Said Mrs. Jones. The warm inviting kitchen looked all too familiar to  Roger. All the memories of the night came flooding back and he realized how much he trusted Mrs. Jones.
“Mrs. Jones,” He said ready to come out and say it. She looked at him patiently waiting. “I’m homeless.”
TO BE CONTINUED


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